For the successful completion of CS 379H,
each student must make an oral and written presentation of his
or her research. (Both must be completed independent of whether
the course is being used to satisfy "substantial writing
component" degree requirements or not.) Both oral and written
presentations must be approved by the advisor, the "second
reader", and the honors advisor. The second reader may be
anyone else on the CS faculty familiar with the material and must
be approved by the honors advisor. Generally the advisor will
suggest individuals who could serve as second readers.
The oral presentation should take about
one hour with 25 minutes reserved for a the student's part and
the rest for question. In attendance at the oral presentation
should be the advisor, the second reader, and the honors advisor.
(Students are free to make public announcements and invite others
at their choice.) Rooms for the presentations can be arranged
through the CS departmental office with Ms. Gem Naivar (gem@cs.utexas.edu
and 471-7316 ext 0). Students should recognize that faculty plans
at the ends of semesters are often less predictable than in mid-semester
and thus scheduling for the oral presentation should be done several
weeks in advance.
The written thesis should be at least 20
pages in length. In format and appearance, it will conform to
the standard rules of academic writing. There are numerous examples
of previous CS 379H theses in the office of the honors advisor
for loaning. A section below gives an outline of how the presentation
of the material might be organized.
Suggestions for the Oral and Written
Presentations
The question most often posed - and the
most common difficulty - concerns the level of the presentation.
Far too often students prepare presentations as if they were simply
reviews for their advisors of what has been accomplished. The
advisor should already know this. The presentation is for others.
The student should build a model of his
or her typical reader (and listener). The creation of this model
is critical because many times during the writing, the student
will pose the question "how much detail is required for this
section?". These question are answered simply by altering
the question to "how much detail is required by my model
reader?".
The model reader can actually be a real
person (such as a fellow student) or a hypothetical device. If
real, the questions can be answered by approaching the person.
If hypothetical, the questions can only be answered if the model
reader is sufficiently well described. (for example, such a hypothetical
model might be described as a fourth year CS student who has taken
courses x, y, and z but has not taken p, q, or r.) Once again,
the most common problem with presentations is that far too much
is assumed about the background of the model reader. The student
doing the research has immersed himself or herself in the material
for months and many concepts are quite familiar. A proper presentation
recognizes that the typical reader hasn't had any of that familiarity
and thus needs a great deal of assistance in understanding. The
writer should be asking himself or herself at the completion of
every sentence "would that make sense to my model reader?".
1. Organization
Roughly, both written and oral presentations
are similar in organization. Both have introductions, background
material, the new contributions (possibly several sections), and
conclusions. The written version should also contain a one paragraph
abstract of the work.
2. Introduction
This section introduces the problem. It
should contain whatever theory is necessary to understand the
statement and discussion of the problem that has been solved.
The statement of the problem itself should be very clear. (The
second most common difficulty with these presentations is that
the problem itself, what should be the most important item, has
never been definitively stated.) If preliminary definitions are
necessary, they belong in the introduction. When the problem is
stated, there should be no question to the reader what it is.
3. Background Material
This section presents auxiliary material
associated with the problem. Generally it answers two questions:
why is this problem important and what work have others done that
is relevant? This puts the problem into context. The writer should
not assume that the material is so inherently interesting that
no motivation is necessary. It is possible that in the presentation
of others work, more definitions and background theory will need
to added.
4. The New Contributions
This is where the student clearly describes
what he or she has done. It may take several sections. It may
require new definitions and theory. After finishing the section,
the reader should able to answer "what exactly did this student
do?". Although this may be majority of the presentation,
it should rarely be much more than that (i.e., if, by far, most
of the material deals with the new contributions, the introduction
and motivating material may have been slighted.)
5. Conclusions
This is where the results are summarized.
It need not be lengthy. Often students like to add a paragraph
or two on "Future Work" meaning ideas they had but were
not able to pursue.
Comments particular to the oral presentation
The easiest way to organize the presentation
is by using transparencies with an overhead projector. The slides
themselves serve as the cues for the talk. The slides should be
large enough to read (when projected) from the back of the room.
They need not employ complete sentences. Color and figures can
add a lot to the audiences ability to understand. If the project
involved building a system, the oral presentation can conclude
with a demonstration of the system (possibly in another location).
Comments particular to the written
thesis
A special difficulty of a written thesis
(as opposed to an oral presentation) is that the reader is not
present to pose questions. Thus, the writer must anticipate those
questions. Writers should always err on the side of over-explanation
rather than under-explanation. A reader may skip familiar material
and thus over-explanation is only a problem of length. Unfortunately.
if the material is under-explained the reader is forced to guess.
Too many such guesses lead to frustration. Too much frustration
leads to quitting.
A closing comment to students in CS 379H
Most importantly, remember this document
will have your name on it. It will be filed with past undergraduate
honors theses of the department and will be shown to your successors.
Take pride in it and repay your advisor for his or her assistance
by having the best document you can produce. Recognize that such
a high quality piece of work may take weeks or months to prepare.
Questions to be answered:
1. Has the problem been clearly stated?
2. Has the problem been sufficiently motivated?
3. Is each sentence understandable
to the model reader?